July 2010

The Unresolved Past: Cameron Judd on Writing the West

“Anytime you write in a long-established genre, the challenge is to find themes and plots that haven’t been done a thousand times already, and characters who are not caricatures,” said Western novelist Cameron Judd.  “When you sense you are achieving those goals the writing is fun.”

Cameron Judd is the author of more than 30 novels written under his own name and pseudonyms.  He got his start in 1980, on a lark, and has referred to himself elsewhere as a sort of unintentional novelist.  Yet, there is nothing unintentional about his historical novels set in Tennessee and traditional Westerns.  The plotting is intricate and intense and the characterization rich.

To put it poker terms: Cameron Judd writes with a cool hand, but he most definitely isn’t bluffing.
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Great & Timeless Themes of the Human Experience: Susan K. Salzer on Writing the West

“An appreciation of the American West and its literature is not a genre—it’s a state of mind,” said Susan K. Salzer.  “I lose myself completely when researching, reading or writing a Western story. It’s a wonderful escape from the grind of everyday life.”

Susan K. Salzer is a journalist by training and a character-based novelist by inclination.  Her debut novel, Up from Thunder, takes place in Missouri during the Civil War.  The protagonist, 16-year-old Hattie Rood, must take care of a wounded 17-year-old Jesse James.  If Hattie Rood is the heart of the book – her losses, her courage, and her growing love for young Jesse James – then the state of Missouri is the ravaged body of the book.  Despite the horrors being waged around them, Salzer remains focused on the characters.

As a result, Up from Thunder is an achingly beautiful book.

“I think Susan Salzer will be a voice and a force to be heard and recognized in the coming years,” said Johnny D. Boggs, author of Northfield and for president of the Western Writers of America. “Susan does her homework, and can tell a great story. Besides, she’s a strong writer of fiction as well as nonfiction. A lot of writers get caught up in the blood and guts when they tackle Missouri during the Civil War, but her first novel was deeply human, quite moving, just a really wonderful read.”
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Completely Different From the Previous One: Johnny D. Boggs on Writing the West

No two of Johnny D. Boggs’ books are the same.  Each one is set in the American West, sure, but each one also does the unexpected.  Boggs seems constantly to be seeking out new ground, new ways of telling stories, new corners of the American West to call his own.  His occasional iconoclasm grows out of a deep and abiding love for good storytelling in general and the literature of the West in particular.

Boggs writes in a style rooted both in the dramatic arts and journalism.  His fiction is praised as gritty and action-packed as often as it’s praised as being character-driven.  His plots twist and turn and his characters, as he mentions below, often have strong opinions in a confusing world.  Deeply accurate historical research and a mildly twisted imagination steep his novels in liveliness and authenticity.

Before going freelance full-time, Boggs worked as a sports writer for the Dallas Times Herald and Fort Worth Star-Telegram.  These days he contributes regularly to such publications as True West, Wild West, and Boys’ Life. His non-fiction covers all aspects of the West, from travel to history, profiles to apparel.

(While Boggs does not write “cowboy books,” he is indeed an extremely well-dressed cowboy, thanks to his freelance work reviewing Western-wear.  In fact, his hats, shirts, and boots are the topic of discussion wherever and whenever Western writers convene.)

Boggs has won the Spur Award from Western Writers of America (twice), as well as the Western Heritage Wrangler Award.  He is a former president of the Western Writers of America where he led the charge for innovation in the genre.

Below, Boggs and I talk about the literature he loves and writes – the very literature he is constantly help to re-define.
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More than Just Gunfights: Writing the West #1

I grew up on Westerns – movies, television, books, toys. 

I played Cowboys and Indians in the woods of upstate New York and in the snake-infested scrub of South Florida.  I was just as likely to pretend to be a gunslinger as a brave.  The scenarios I dreamed up tended toward last stands, ambushes, and suicide attacks.  I died a lot back then, and loved every minute of it.

Even as a kid, I preferred the grit of Clint Eastwood to the stiff-legged swagger of John Wayne.  Wayne’s one-liners rang false.  Eastwood’s one-liners sizzled.  For better or worse, Eastwood taught the boy how to talk like a man.

Summer days meant re-runs of Bonanza and Big Valley.  I preferred Bonanza all the way. My identification with Little Joe led me to Little House on the Prairie.  My outlaw self-image softened, began to work the farm, raise a family, do right.  Yet, below the honorable lifestyle lurked a man who could take violent action if need be.  I became Pa Ingalls with a wild past.
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When Publishers Do Bad Things

It doesn’t happen that often, thankfully, but sometimes publishers do bad things, things that go beyond issues of incompetence or lack of organization. Usually these “bad things” have to do with non-payment of royalties or advances, the cancellation of books for specious reasons, and/or poor or abusive treatment of the author during the editorial or publishing process. (Granted, repeated cancellation of books may just indicate poor initial decision-making on the part of a publisher, but is still an important factor when considering what publisher to go with–assuming you have a choice.)

What are usually not valid excuses for bad behavior?

—Blaming sudden growth for non-payment of monies because of supposed ma-and-pop corner store accounting practices. Most all publishers, large and small, deal with distributors and wholesalers who keep records of books sold. It would be unlikely that any publisher would not have a fairly good idea of book sales for an individual title, no matter how busy they are. Publishers have to communicate with the entities that help them sell their books in order to keep publishing. This requires them to stay in the loop.

—Suggesting communication issues as a generic catch-all reason that absolves particular individuals of responsibility, especially in cases where it is quite clear that those who have been ill-served have been attempting to communicate and simply have been ignored. In this case, the excuse is simply an effort to stave off negative publicity.

—Putting the onus on the individual writers published by the publisher to come to them with any issues or problems related to non-payment.
This suggests a less than proactive approach on the publisher’s part and may simply be a delaying tactic.

Always remember that by the time individual writers are willing to say bad things about a particular publisher, this is usually just the tip of the iceberg, to use a cliche. Very few writers feel comfortable bad-mouthing their publisher, for fear of being seen as difficult. In cases where several writers have spoken out, you can almost always guarantee that many of those who haven’t spoken out also have issues with the publisher.

When considering a publisher, be sure to check with a sampling of writers published by that publisher, to get a sense of how consistent, honest, and fair the publisher is in dealing with writers. From a writer’s point of view, a publisher is only as good as the average experience that can be expected in dealing with them. Every publisher will have highs and lows depending on personalities and issues beyond anyone’s control.

Also remember that indie presses in particular have their eccentricities, and that each press has its strengths and its weaknesses. This is not the same thing as “bad behavior”–these are simply the quirks writers have to deal with, just as the publisher and acquiring editor are agreeing to put up with your quirks, in a sense, and you will have to decide which quirks you don’t mind and which make a publisher unattractive to you.

Soundtracks, Silence & What Good Writing Needs: Music & Writing #3

I’ve heard of writers developing soundtracks for a book-length project.  Some even print a playlist as an appendix or on their blog or give a shout out to specific bands in the acknowledgements at the beginning of the book.  I’ve always thought that was a cool idea, but have never tried developing a soundtrack.  Nor have I, say, listened along to an author’s suggested playlist while reading the book.

But I like the idea.  Like it a lot.

I can’t focus on any one selection of songs long enough to develop a single soundtrack or playlist for a given project.  Almost constantly, I move around within a limited range of genres – folk, psychedelic, jam band, jazz, Texas troubadours.  Any project that takes longer than a week or two will be accompanied by lots of Grateful Dead followed by lots of Bob Dylan… only to skid off the tracks into rough and raw field recordings of Woody Guthrie or Leadbelly or some such.

Again, I like the idea of sticking with a handful of songs and letting their rhythms and moods seep into the words, into the soul of the project I am developing.  There is something, I don’t know, simultaneously organized and rock ‘n’ roll about the idea.  (And, let’s face it, I am neither of those things.)

If anything, the music of the Grateful Dead has been the most consistent accompaniment to any of my creative projects.  The Dead have taught me about taking risks, being willing to fail, and going with the flow, about opening up, expanding, lifting off, about blending and mixing.

At the other end of the continuum is the writer who works, as a rule, in silence.  I might be so hot to get something down that I forget to turn on the music or I might get so deep into the flow I don’t notice that the music has stopped.  But any sustained effort will more than likely have an ever-shifting selection of music, lots and lots of music. 

In a continued effort to get a handle on a session I will be teaching at the Writing in Place Conference this August, I asked five more writers about their relationship with music.  Below are their bios, the questions, and their responses.

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Ed Greenwood is the author Falconfar and the forthcoming Elminster Must Die!, among many other books.  A prolific game writer, Greenwood created the Forgotten Realms setting, which has been used in the Dungeons & Dragons role-playing game and as a setting for hundreds of novels.

Ian C. Esslemont is the author of Night of Knives, Return of the Crimson Guard, and the forthcoming Stonewielder.  His novels are set in the Malazan Empire, a fictional world co-created with Steven Erikson.

John Jeter is the author of The Plunder Room.  He and his wife own The Handlebar, a small music venue in Greenville, SC.

Jackie Kessler is the author of the Hell on Earth novels and co-author with Caitlin Kittredge of the the Icarus Project novels, including Black and White and Shades of Gray.

Caitlin R. Kiernan is the author of The Red Tree, A Is for Alien, and The Ammonite Violin & Others, among many other books.  In the late 1990s, Kiernan was the singer and lyricist for Death’s Little Sister.

 

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In what ways do you or have you used music to enhance your writing and creativity?
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Ian C. Esslemont:  Some writers I know demand temple-like silence for their creative process.  Others seem to thrive amidst the chaos and chatter of cafes.  Myself, I need music.  In fact, I must have music to write.  I cannot claim that the flow, the mood, and the rhythm translate from the music into my prose – perhaps not at all – but I find it a great help in my creative process nonetheless. 

What it does seem to give me is impetus and energy.  It also seems to help dissolve the room around me thus helping to seduce me into the dream, that “willing suspension of disbelief,” that is the act of writing and reading. 

So far, as I work on any single piece, and the months pass, a particular soundtrack of favored music seems to develop for each.  For one recent novel it was pretty much the soundtrack of Kill Bill

 

Ed Greenwood:  Music is the great soother, and mood-alterer, drowner-out of unwanted noise, and can be an aid in concentration. I say “can be” because it has to be the right music, which varies for each of us. I can use grand overtures or scary music or hauntingly eerie music or achingly sad music to “put myself in the mood” for writing scenes or passages that match those emotions.

For me, however, I dare not do the actual writing to the accompaniment of such music, because it fools me into thinking I’ve fully and richly conveyed those emotions onto the page, when I haven’t. (I know this doesn’t necessarily hold true for other writers.)

John Jeter:  As co-owner of a live-music venue, I’m exposed to all manner of music as performance art, creativity, expression — and writing. Some of the best songwriters in America have performed in my concert hall and seeing them and hearing them and their songs have helped me in big ways.

Watching an artist put it all out there, give it all up, lay herself totally open and on the line in front of a mass of people inspires the artist in me to be just as vulnerable. While theirs is a very public display of craft, writing is a solo enterprise (unless you share your work with friends, colleagues, spouses/partners, etc.).

Plus, watching/listening to a sprawling array of genres expands the mind and offers broader and deeper clues into my own personal creative potential, offering “permission” to take risks, push boundaries, experiment.

On the business side, the musician’s life has to be equally as brutal, if not worse than the writer’s. Writers, at least, get to stay home (tours are pretty much toast). Rejection still abounds for both, and yet the art remains the goal.

Jackie Kessler:  In the Hell on Earth series, music was essential. Part of that was because the main character was an exotic dancer, so when I described her stage sets I really wanted the readers to feel the music the way that she felt the music. So I’d play specific songs to help envision her sets.

But more than that, some music really helped capture a specific mood, or the general atmosphere. In the second Hell book, the main character summons a demon. As she waits for the demon to appear, I played Depeche Mode’s “Pimpf” again and again to help me feel the building urgency, the growing sense of something dark about to happen.

When I was writing my second YA novel, I played tons of Nirvana. (One of the characters looks exactly like Kurt Cobain.) I’d also play certain songs (from Shinedown, Breaking Benjamin, Three Days Grace, etc.) to help with specific moods…especially highly emotional scenes.

Right now, my working theme song for the third YA is Linkin Park’s “New Divide.” It’s just perfect.

Caitlin R. Kiernan:  It’s rare that I can write in silence, without music.  I use music to create and sustain mood and voice while I’m writing. I’ll admit that I’ve used alcohol and drugs for the same purpose, but I tend to find that music is both more effective and less detrimental to my health.

Before I begin a short story, I find an appropriate “soundtrack,” music that matches the intended mood of the piece. It might be a whole album, or it might be a single song. Sometimes, I’ll listen to one song fifty or more times while I’m writing a single story. A story’s “soundtrack” might consist of music from one artist or from several. For example, I just finished a short story called “Tidal Forces,” which took me five days to get out, and it was written to a few songs from Radiohead’s The Bends, and How to Destroy Angels “A Drowning,” and two or three songs off the Editors In This Light and On This Evening. I do the same thing with novels, though any given novel might require dozens of artists, many dozens of songs.

I suppose I really do think of the songs as a soundtrack. I’m writing, not making film, but, in effect, in the movie in my mind (because what I write is always a movie in my mind), these songs compose the films soundtrack.

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And/or what has music — listening to it, seeing it live, playing it, writing it, whichever — taught you about writing fiction?

 

John Jeter:  Listening to singer/songwriters has taught me an enormous amount about the economy of words, the poetry that can be applied to prose and the importance of Show/Don’t Tell in creating vivid, image-laden stories within a tightly confined structure. Songwriters such as James McMurtry, Bruce Springsteen, Fred Eaglesmith, Lucinda Williams, Robert Earl Keen, Nanci Griffith, Guy Clark (what’s with Texas?) and many more are masters of the story-song craft. All of those artists create miniature music videos in their songs, with tightly drawn (and often Steinberg-esque) characters and settings. When I “see” precisely what words these artists choose to show their stories, I can apply the same principles in my own narratives.

 

Ed Greenwood:  That the pacing and flow of narrative is of paramount importance. It’s not just what’s said, it’s how it’s conveyed. Over the years, I’ve heard many “standards” (from medieval airs to rock anthems) done by various performers, and although we all prefer this version or that version, if you stop to think about why you prefer this or that, or Element A from Version 1 but also Element B from Version 36, it tells you about your own preferences but also about what “works” (and doesn’t) in particular situations of communication…which of course can be applied to one’s own writing.

Jackie Kessler:  Go with the feeling. That’s a big one. Sometimes, it’s easy to get caught up with: “Is this the best way to move the story forward?” Just as important is: “Is this how I should be feeling when I’m reading this?” Words need to evoke feelings; done properly, they carry their own melodies. Just like something’s got to happen, the reader has to make a connection. Trusting in the music can help you trust in the words. Play the right music, and see what words come pouring out.

Caitlin R. Kiernan:  This is a hard question to answer, because I think it’s hard to point to simple one-to-one correspondences, and it’s hard to answer this without oversimplifying things. But I can say that there are singers and songwriters and bands that have taught me a great deal about rhythm and the poetics of prose. I study, consciously or unconsciously, the cadence of a song, and apply to my fiction. Some of them have had a lasting effect, genuinely shaping how I write, how I fit words together. In this category, I’d put R.E.M., David Bowie, Kate Bush, Nick Cave, Nine Inch Nails, Radiohead — it’s a long, long list.

Then there are musicians who seem to be very important for a brief time, or at least a limited time. They allow me to experiment, and show me how to do this or that, but then the experiment fails or I just move on. The Sisters of Mercy are a good example of bands in this category. Tales of Pain and Wonder was written between 1994 and 1999, and the band is all over those stories, but I pretty much never listen to the Sisters anymore, not for the last decade. I’ve gone somewhere else. I’ll go back to them sometimes and try to use them the way I used to, because that sound was so potent, so consistently efficacious, but it simply doesn’t work anymore.

Then there’s a third class of musicians, who are utterly brilliant and definitely inform my work, but I absolutely cannot write to them. They’re just too good, and I’m too distracted by their words to focus on my own. Tom Waits and Patti Smith fall into this class.

Anyway, the point is, I’d say I’ve learned as much from songwriters about how good prose should sound as I have from writers and poets who do not intend for their words to be set to music.

 

Ian C. Esslemont:  I won’t descend into extolling any one genre over another for music to write by – that is too much up to personal taste.  Whatever gets the job done, I say.  I will however put in an appeal for variation.  Just as in one’s reading I think you should avoid the same thing over and over.  Try other genres, experiment, freshen the pallet every once in a while.  I guess you could say it’s kinda like travel.  Trying other genres in reading and in music broadens the mind. 

And I think that’s what good writing needs.