Deal In Hand

Howard Andrew Jones’s debut historical fantasy novel, The Desert of Souls (Thomas Dunne Books 2011), was widely acclaimed by influential publications like Library Journal, Kirkus, and Publisher’s Weekly, where it was labeled “a splendid flying-carpet ride.” It made Kirkus’ New and Notable list for 2011, and was on both Locus’s Recommended Reading List and the Barnes and Noble Best Fantasy Releases list of 2011. Additionally, The Desert of Souls was a finalist for the prestigious Compton Crook Award, and a featured selection of The Science Fiction Book Club. Its sequel, The Bones of the Old Ones, is available now. He is hard at work on a third historical fantasy novel as well as a sequel to his Pathfinder Tales novel, Plague of Shadows.


Offer in hand, it was a little simpler to go looking for an agent, a search made even simpler because of friends I’d made over the years who already had agents themselves. I’ve said it before, and I’ll say it once more, and I’ll say it again ‘til my sayer is sore — if you want to succeed in the industry you must become involved in the industry. Go to conventions. Write editors who publish work you like. Read fiction in the magazines where you’re published and reach out to writers whose work you’ve enjoyed. Read slush. Write reviews. Become part of the community.

I couldn’t help getting involved — I loved the fantasy genre and wanted to be a part of it. What I didn’t realize at first was that I was laying down lines of communication that would later serve me well. Friends I had made early on had agents, so that when I needed one I was quickly able to be introduced. I chose between two very fine fellows, and now work with the talented Bob Mecoy.

I’ve read a lot of advice about how writers don’t need agents. It could be that the advice is right if you already know what you’re doing and are good with business. Like much writer advice, though, mileage will vary. I’m a writer who needs an agent. I have my hands full writing and promoting, thanks. I like to be able to lean on someone to handle the other stuff, someone who is experienced with publishing and, someone who, frankly, is a helluva lot better at negotiating things.

A good agent is your business partner, not your new best friend, although after a few years together I consider Bob a friend of mine. A good agent not only can offer solid career advice, open doors, and negotiate contracts, they can offer plotting help when an editor’s shot down part of your story arc. Not every agent can do that, but mine can.

Once I was working with Bob, and the contract was signed, it was time to start on some revisions, and to start talking about promotions. St. Martin’s sent me a long questionnaire asking me what authors and editors I knew, whose writing I thought my book might be like, how I thought the text could be marketed, etcetera. It was pretty thorough, and I didn’t understand at first that this was the opening stage of the whole marketing process. A good publisher wants your take on things, though they will be using their own sources as well.

I suppose I should stop now and talk about traditional publishing over self publishing. You hear a whole lot about the benefits of self-publishing, and there are a myriad of them. But too often I see people talk those up and denigrate traditional publishing. My experience with the older method has been a good one. If I’m lucky in agents, I’m likewise fortunate in editors, because

Pete Wolverton is heavily invested in his books. He wants to bring out the best in the novels he edits His feedback is helpful, thoughtful, and in tune with the work. Sometimes it almost seems like he knows the characters better than I do (occasionally he’s sent me a note like “that doesn’t sound like Dabir,” then explains why, and he’s always right).

Granted, not all traditional publisher still employs editors like Pete. Mine does, and my work is better for it. It’s not just editing, though that should count for a lot. My publisher has an entire legal wing that shuts down e-pirates, who can, and do, pop up like whack-a-moles to give away free copies of the book I spent a year writing and a couple of decades honing my craft to be able to write. My publisher has a promotional team with vast connections and the ability to send a WHOLE LOT of copies out for review.

Anyway, back to the process. Before I knew it, the book was going to be printed in an advanced review copy, or ARC, and the marketing phase was about to start. I was to discover I had become a small business owner without even knowing it.

The First Glimmers

Howard Andrew Jones’s debut historical fantasy novel, The Desert of Souls (Thomas Dunne Books 2011), was widely acclaimed by influential publications like Library Journal, Kirkus, and Publisher’s Weekly, where it was labeled “a splendid flying-carpet ride.” It made Kirkus’ New and Notable list for 2011, and was on both Locus’s Recommended Reading List and the Barnes and Noble Best Fantasy Releases list of 2011. Additionally, The Desert of Souls was a finalist for the prestigious Compton Crook Award, and a featured selection of The Science Fiction Book Club. Its sequel, The Bones of the Old Ones, will be available tomorrow. He is hard at work on a third historical fantasy novel as well as a sequel to his Pathfinder Tales novel, Plague of Shadows.


I’d been writing short stories about my 8th century Arabian adventurers Dabir and Asim for ten years when I decided to take the plunge and write a novel about them. I’d been thinking about writing a novel centered around the characters for a long time, A.) because I really enjoyed writing their exploits and B.) because I’d consistently sold every story about them that I’d written, which was a significant improvement over my other writing efforts.

But I didn’t jump in without deliberation. I knew interest in historicals was said to be waning, and I wasn’t sure how a Dabir and Asim novel would be shelved. It would historical BUT contain fantastic elements. And it would have mystery, and horror. In this era of niche publishing, how on Earth would it be marketed, and what publisher would be interested in it? The more I thought about writing the novel, the worse the idea seemed, and so I put it off. In retrospect, maybe that was good, because it allowed me to continue my researches into ancient Arabia, which I was doing for fun. And it gave me more time to hone my craft.

Finally, after collecting another round of rejections for a secondary world fantasy I’d been shopping around, I took a good look in the mirror. I would be turning forty soon, and was wondering if I’d managed to delude myself. Maybe I was really only writing to please myself. And if I was doing that, why not draft the work I was really wanting to write? The one I was most inspired to write?

So I put an outline together, sat down, and got to work. I didn’t have a publisher or an agent in mind, I just worked on the book. It was a spectacularly bad plan in a lot of ways, except for three things. Because of my enthusiasm for the period and literature, I had already done a lot of the ground work as far as research. Because I’d been writing about the central characters for years, I already knew who they were. And because I wasn’t worried about the market or the audience, I was free to just sit back and write the kind of tale that would most please myself.

And boy, did I have fun. I firmly believe that if you’re not having fun writing it, people aren’t going to have fun reading it, because that’s surely been true in my own experience. Maybe one day I’ll hear that Fritz Leiber and Roger Zelazny hated writing of Lankhmar and Amber, but I doubt it.

I had one other thing going for me. Because I’d been working in the industry for a number of years, I had a lot of editor and writer friends. One of them is the gifted Scott Oden, who I’d met partly because of our shared interest in the historicals of Harold Lamb but mostly because his first book (Men of Bronze) had knocked me out. I wrote Scott to ask if he’d be interested in writing the introduction to one of the Harold Lamb collections I was editing for Bison Books, and we struck up a correspondence. As writers do, we occasionally exchanged manuscripts for feedback.

And one late night, when I meant to send him a short story I was struggling over, I accidentally sent him the first third of The Desert of Souls. You might be thinking, sure, wink wink, nudge nudge, but the truth is that I don’t share rough drafts. Ask my wife and my editors. I hate anyone seeing them. Scott was effusive about how much he enjoyed the wrong work I’d sent him. He told his editor about it, then told me that his editor wished to see the book as soon as I was done.

It was a nice shot in the arm, but when I finished the book and Scott dutifully sent it on to Peter Wolverton at Thomas Dunne Books (St. Martin’s) I fully expected to get a rejection. That’s how things had worked so far. A rejection wasn’t what I wanted, but I was prepared.

About a month later I received an e-mail from Thomas Dunne Books. My pulse pounding despite myself, I opened it, and saw to my surprise that instead of a form rejection or a personal note explaining what the publisher had liked but why they had to pass, Pete provided me with a phone number and asked me to call that morning.

I got up, made myself a cup of tea, and drank it slowly. I figured this was a danged funny way to deliver a rejection, and that this was likely to be the kind of conversation I’d been longing to hear for a couple of decades. My tea finished, I punched in the numbers and made the call.

The next thing I knew, I’d been offered a book deal.

What Do I Look Like to You?

Ethan Young was born in 1983 in NYC to Chinese immigrant parents. After attending the School of Visual Arts for one semester, Young left to pursue an illustration career. His first graphic novel, “Tails: Life in Progress”, was awarded the Gold Medal for Best Graphic Novel during the 2007 Independent Publishers Book Awards.  He has recently reworked “Tails” into an ongoing webcomic, with print editions released through Hermes Press. In addition to comic book work, Young is also a prolific freelance illustrator. You can find more information about him and his work at tailscomic.com, his Facebook page, or follow him on Twitter @EthanYoungTails.


“Wait, Ethan is supposed to be Asian?”

That question, more than any other, flooded my inbox during the early days of my online comic, Tails. I really didn’t expect the topic of race to be such a big deal. Tails follows the misadventures of Ethan (named after myself), an Asian cartoonist who fosters cats, is broke, vegan, and a tad on the whiney side. Cartoon Ethan (as I’ve come to call him) is my comic book facsimile, an embodiment of my early 20s, and yes, Asian (Chinese to be specific).  So, how could someone mistake an obviously autobiographical character for a different race?

The most obvious explanation: he looked kinda White. Was this intentional? Not really.  There were several reasons for how I drew the character, and each seemed entirely logical when I created the comic. For one, I had spent my entire adolescence illustrating Caucasian heroes. Not just super-heroes I copied from comics, but my own heroes as well. I would create fantastical stories and intrinsically made the protagonists Caucasian. Why did I do this? Well, look at the most popular super-hero characters: Superman, Batman, Spiderman, Iron Man, Wonder Woman.  All White, mostly men.  Some things just sneak their way into your psyche.

Another solid reason: most cartoonists tend to exaggerate the expressions on the human face, which means making the eyes bigger. And it’s safe to say, big round eyes are not an Oriental trait. Just examine the vast majority of Anime and Manga, where characters consistently have big eyes, tiny noses, and for some reason, hair color that doesn’t exist in the natural world. No human being looks that way, let alone a Japanese native. So, in my defense, I’m not alone in the Our-characters-look-less-Asian camp.

Still, that’s no excuse. As a writer, it’s my job to convey that my character is this, this, and that. If he’s Chinese, the audience should be aware of that, whether it’s through visual acknowledgment or through the dialogue and text.  However, outside of subtle cultural differences (such as how the traditional Chinese family unit operates, or the patriarch’s semi-broken English) Ethan’s family could be your family at a cursory glance. Combine that with the fact that my characters don’t look Oriental (or Oriental enough) and I opened myself up to that inquisition:

“Wait, Ethan is supposed to be Asian?”

I’ve found that Asian characters are generally portrayed 1 of 3 ways in mainstream media: they can your kick ass with kung fu, they are extremely smart and sexually innocuous, or ‘Hey, it’s an Asian girl dating the non-Asian guy!’ Obviously, there are exceptions to this rule, but those exceptions also prove the rule.  I don’t find these portrayals unfair or degrading, mind you, but they’re not entirely engaging either.

It’s my dream to see an Asian actor in the lead role in a network sitcom, without everyone making a big deal that it’s an Asian actor in the lead role in a network sitcom.

Well, that’s one of my dreams…

Anyway, that’s how I approached Tails.  I wanted to portray an Asian-American character as American first and Asian second.  This was not done to denounce my heritage, but rather to ‘normalize’ it.  To me, my life is more than a collection of stereotypes.  Being that Tails is semi-autobiographical, the story is deeply personal and excruciatingly honest at times, the comic has been a form of quasi-self-therapy, allowing me to constructively work through my petulant youth (I suspect that this is the case with most creators who dabble in autobio comics).  Calling attention to my race wasn’t necessary for the story I needed to tell.  I’m not asking for readers to be ‘color blind’; that’s simply compounding ignorance with more ignorance.  But rather, let’s just embrace race…and move on.

Even with all my self-righteous rationality, I’d be lying if I neglected to mention ‘shame’ being a small factor.  My parents immigrated to America a year before I was born.  When you grow up as an ABC (American Born Chinese), you’re not Chinese enough for your family and not American enough for everyone else.  Plus, you get targeted by racism, which is never fun.  And not just the “No, where are you really from?” brand of folksy ignorance, but the “Go back to your fucking country!” brand of hostile bigotry.  Once puberty hits, you’re seen as a nerd, even if you’re not all that nerdy (#2 on the stereotype list).  There were times when I wished I could simply reinvent myself, simply fit in.  Is that what I did in Tails?  I guess, in a way, but less cynically.  Once again, I was aiming to disprove stereotypes, but it came from a somewhat defensive position.  That’s the funny thing about shame – you carry it with you your whole life, no matter how comfortable you’ll eventually become in your own skin.

Tails features an Asian-American, and no, it isn’t a story about what it’s like to be Asian.  Ethan is a struggling cartoonist who drinks too much and complains too often.  He’s geeky, sure, but he’s also cool and chases girls and has the same everyday troubles that any New Yorker has to deal with.  I’m not the first creator who’s tried to craft a post-racial comic, and I won’t be the last.  But with my own little webcomic, I think I’ve managed to talk about race without actually talking about race.

­Not that, you know, it’s a big deal or anything.

Portfolios

I’ve posted in the past about the need for anyone in a creative profession to have a toolkit. Today, we’ll look at one of the biggest pieces of that toolkit, the portfolio.

A creative portfolio is basically a glorified resume. As a creative professional, it gives prospective clients or employers an opportunity to get a sense of your style and professionalism. It also means that, if someone asks to see your work, you don’t have to scramble through old folders, trying to figure out which pieces are suitable, or finished, or ‘good’. All you need to do is zip up the folder and email it right to them, or take it to interviews on a flash drive.

It’s also a good idea to have several versions, depending on your career and experience. Since each person’s portfolios will differ, I’ll share how mine are set up.

I have a varied career, which is both good and bad, but for the purposes of the post, means several very different collections.

Editorial
My editorial portfolio is inclusive of anthologies, magazine and blog editing. I have covers from my projects, a selection of strong reviews, and some actual content, including an ebook edition of one of the magazines I edited.

Publicity
Sell sheets I’ve written, coverage I’ve obtained, tours I’ve organized, etc. The idea here is to give an image of the range of my experience and clients.

Writing
Pretty self-explanatory! I should probably break this into two sections for my own work, but I haven’t…yet. This is where customization really comes into play. Are you applying for a creative position? Pitching nonfiction? Editorial? You don’t want your prospect to have to read five or six things before getting to the one they need to read. A variety is good, but make sure the title shows which one it is.

Not everything in a writing portfolio needs to be completed short stories or novels. Looking for game design work? Have some pieces of world-building you contributed to another project, even if it wasn’t gaming. Need nonfiction work? Make a list of the pieces you have finished, with a short description and publication history of each…and a list of pieces you want to write or are currently working on. Again, label clearly.

And, finally…
The bones of the portfolio are the same for all of them: you need a bio, a headshot, an easily-edited cover letter and resume. You won’t need these every time you send out a portfolio, but it keeps everything in one handy place.

As usual, this varies by person, career and career path. Figure out what works for you, and run with that, but always be sure to keep it fresh, edited , consistent, clearly-labeled and professional.